The day finally came
she sat at a strategic point
He too sat strategically
their eyes met and locked
and they knew they were each others date
two hours seemed like two seconds
the vibe seemed casual on culture diversity
he escorted her to the shuttle
and had the final announcement of arrival home
with gratitude for the time two strangers had met
will they see each other again?
are the chats good enough for sustained loyalty?
only time will tell
for only strangers with a common dream can be friends
She waits, He waits, They wait.
Wow this poem literally tells my life from last year on... Thank you for sharing this :)
You are most welcome Julie...it does happen to most human beings...wish you the best.
You know what... I love your type of vivid poetry!
Beautiful depiction of love at first sight - a natural mutual affinity, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Rose. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
i so love the suspense in the poem, write a follow up one.WE WAIT TOO She waits, He waits, They wait.
Life lessons, we meet people and probably that marks the end or beginning of new journey together.I so love the suspense in the wait by all.You score a 10 for this Rose.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A circumstance that many of us have experienced. Nicely penned, Rose. Thanks
i appreciate Kelly...my first attempt in written poetry