Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,339 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

The Sun Is Beautiful Honey But The Moon Is You - Poem by Ali Sabry

The sun is beautiful honey but the moon is you
The earth is full of friends but the best & the wonderfully friend is you
If you will forget me my wonderful beauty lady that is something up to you
I’ll never forget you forever in all my life because I love you so much
I love you so much from all my heart & I miss you from a long time
My wonderful lady I am always in all the night thinking of you
My lovely lady I became crazy about your love from the first time I met you Because you are very smart & beautiful girl I loved you the moment I saw you
You are my soul breeze & my soul twin & my life is only with a lady like you
God bless you my lovely princess & angels protects you in whole your life.


Comments about The Sun Is Beautiful Honey But The Moon Is You by Ali Sabry

  • (4/15/2016 12:40:00 PM)


    its touch my feelings full of emotions (Report) Reply

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  • (5/4/2015 7:26:00 PM)


    Strong emotion of true love. Suggestions: line 2: ' the most wonderful friend is you'. L.3: omit 'something'.-not needed. 'my soul's breeze', l.9. 'I have missed you for a long time'. L.5. ' and may angels protect you all your life'.-last line. Michael Walker. (Report) Reply

  • (11/1/2012 4:23:00 AM)


    Lovely piece keep up and thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011



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