The Test Of The Chief Poem by prashant shaurya
The Test Of The Chief
Much before spring
when the dry leaves fall
the bare brown branches
gave me a call....
And filled with pity
when I expressed my grief
they just went on to praise
the test of the CHIEF...
They said, life's like your school
divided into classes
where, who goes by the Teacher
is the one who passes....
And when the springs began
they called me once again
to show me that it's good
to be faithful in pain...
Now I had understood
that GOD is not so rude
but at times HE intends
to test our servitude....
God moves in mysterious ways, as your poem shows rather delightfully. Your final stanza is particularly appealing, particularly the line 'God is not so rude'. You are a fine story-teller, Prashant. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
The poem depicts a better perspective of life and understanding of faith in God. Beautifully written...10/10. Best Wishes. Naseer
It is by our understanding of life that we have to have the faith to endure the hardships we face in it.
dear prashant....it is a beautiful poem with a message.i feel god tests us all the time, to make us remember him, in our best and worst times.only with our servitude, humbleness, and love for him we can get his blessings.simple message put forth in lovely words.thanks for sharing. ritty
thanks for sharing this poem to me... but please share this poem also for others so that they may know...
Fantastic idea on the nature of God. The story inThe test of The Chief is a simile of the life of a human. You are a good understander of nature, it is like a sermonette.10++
Fantastic idea on the nature of God. The story inThe test of Cheif is a simile of the life of a human. You are a good understander of nature, it is like a sermonette.10++
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I would like to translate this poem
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its a light poem with a great message....you write from your heart...let the good work continue....I liked you poem...we all are candidates in the test of servitude...wow