The Time Machine Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

The Time Machine

Rating: 5.0


It must have been a holy man who left
the gadget at my door that governs time.
And using it feels eerily like theft,
which in my eyes sure qualifies as crime.

I use it now to peek and even fly
into the future looking at the sights;
last night I hovered back and had to cry,
it looked so pitiful from lofty heights.

There is a switch that lets a person stay
in case he likes the future goings on.
For me, my many friends, it is a Nay
I'd rather die in my next marathon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Expertly composed H. I am not sure why I find the second verse slightly saddening. Chris put it perfectly in relation to the last verse. t x

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Chris Mendros 08 May 2007

Defiantly satisfied. Can it get any better? Nice work.

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