The Tough Pilgrimage Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Tough Pilgrimage

Rating: 5.0


Charming night is still young
And the dark sky is getting old.
Virgin Moon roams around
Until the dawn comes.
Proud Sun burns
And makes wild fire in the hearts of solitary pilgrims.
But still they are ready to worship in the decayed Inn of life.

I dedicate this poem to my poet friend Duncan.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 31 August 2007

A bit of night music for the soul. You are an excellent imagist. Warm regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 31 August 2007

This is a most lyrical piece, which personalizes the elements of the earth and sky with great skill and charm. I fine tribute to Duncan, a great poet and a compassionate soul. love, Allie xxxx

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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