The Trace Of A Flight Poem by fatemeh zolfagharian

The Trace Of A Flight

Rating: 5.0


wide wide dark wing
outstretched hovering

over the white fog, loud
before the unfettered cloud

soared up up up
seized the soul of the rocks

the black eagle, in the arms
of the blue endless realm

the torn tether of dream
paused the life, seized the scene

to follow the trace of
high flight in the sky

But a hundred alas
No footprints, when they pass

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Cochrane 22 July 2022

Very well written excellent

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Okim Otu 23 July 2022

Awesome. Top star.

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Rebecca Navarre 13 August 2022

Amazing feel and imagery! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 August 2022

Deeply beautiful and ever so heart moving! ..

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 August 2022

Great writing, exquisite imagery.5 stars.

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Nabakishore Dash 23 July 2022

Extraordinary description of the high flight.

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Marvellous poem, Fatemeh. Expressions like ‘soul of the rocks', ‘the torn tether of dream' etc. are unique and elevate the soul of the poem to great heights and reveals the extraordinary talent of the poet. Keep it up, Fatemeh. All the best.

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