The Uninvited Guest ~ Part.3 Concluding.. Poem by M. Asim Nehal
The Uninvited Guest ~ Part.3 Concluding..
I request you to read the two earlier Parts before reading this poem..
Then came the unwanted part of my story
About which everybody warned and cautioned
The pain, the sorrow, the loneliness
Never imagined that my heart will
Pound out of from my body
And will bleed so profusely
That the dusk sky will reflect
The volcanic ejection to perfection
The darkness of the night will cover
My agony under the umbrella of solitary moon
My eyes suffered, my ears suffered
My whole body started to suffer
And this suffering did not stop here
The nature, the sun, the birds
Everybody suffered,
The mirage of life seemed endless chain of accidents
With endless cycle of sufferings
Life showed me the glimpses of 'JOY'
And punished me with endless 'PAINS'.
And this uninvited guest disappeared
Like clouds from the sky……
Beneath the sparkling eyes
Quivering soft lips
Dancing hairs
Shiny teethes
Rolling tongue
Bubbling heart
Everything got buried.
Oh! This is really uninvited guest brought the real bad omen. Painful ending.
As Poet Zumas Millamo said here below: So very true. By the way, you added lovely metaphors in the ardent poem. A very thought-provoking poem with philosophical tints
The mirage of life seemed endless chain of accidents With endless cycle of sufferings. So true, BUT happiness and Love must never be forgotten too, BUT this is an excellent series of emotive poems. I have enjoyed endlessly and true philosophical points are weaved herein. Prefectly rendered!
By the way: I have read the previous two series and now this adorning poem so true! 5 Stars full on Top, Mr. Asim Sir! I have enjoyed very much
We all have one or the other uninvited guest, they are our husband/ wife/ lovers etc and when they leave or do not do what is expected we go through this pain.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/14/2024 10:27:30 PM # 1.0.0.1119
As I thought, you did full justice with the subject and fantastically concluded this series of love..(Uninvited Guest series) Lovely and painful.