The Untamed Comments

'Playing hide and seek with my emotions'... a beautiful poetic phrase associated with the moon imagery there...the word 'smoulder' effectively qualifying the hide and seek play...i enjoyed this write... poem ten grade

it's strange how we Imbue the moon with romantic and emotional powers, after all it's just a rock in space, poets make it sound like a Wondrous place... Anita such a great write... Andrew 10

Great write. I like the line about playing hide and seek with your emotions...very clever. Is that a reference about the moon being covered by the passing clouds and then reappearing throughout the night...or did I misinterpret it? Either way its intriguing. Top marks! -Michael

Anita, well written piece with a great deal of mystery.10/10 Ian