The V Poem by Savita Tyagi

The V

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At this time of the year, the big oak trees on both side
Of street are loaded with emerald green leaves.
Where the street ends, it creates a huge V in sky.
When the sun recedes into soft evening and birds come to roost,
Walking alone on empty quiet street I made a V
With my fingers to follow that V shape,
In trying to unite with the silent tranquil space's
Vast sketch of peace and spread out grace.

A chain of thought flashed through my mind.
Numerous ancient symbols are buried mystically
Deep in letter V, now shrouded in history of time.
The great God Pan - worshiped by ancient Greeks,
Lord of Shepard, rustic music, and wild of hills,
Or the V for the victory- Churchill's famous hand sign,
Not to mention the Japanese peace sign glittering in
Neon light crossed through my internal eyes.

But all this long history of letter V only had a faded
Presence behind nature's big and impressive canvas.
Here a vernacular design was hung in front of me
Made by an unpretentious and superb artist's
Natural brush strokes and simple lines.
Just as I was about to take my eyes off from the sky,
Few wild geese came flying through that V shape
And disappeared quickly into the dense dome of trees.

Saturday, June 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,nature walks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 20 June 2016

and the geese were flying in a V-formation, i suppose? U.S.nickels used to have a capital V, Roman numeral 5, on one side. of course i'm not so old that i remember them! nice, Savita. may you always find peace in nature! bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 21 June 2016

Thanks Bri for reading and commenting. Yes I do find peace in Nature.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 June 2016

Empty quiet street I made a V on nature's impressive canvas. Keen observations and interpretations. Effect of the perspective which converts three dimensional nature into two dimensional screen of the eye. Nature's secret is beautifully revealed.

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Savita Tyagi 12 June 2016

Thank you Tirupati Ji for your comment. Appreciate your reading the poem.

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Kelly Kurt 11 June 2016

Oh Savita, this is gorgeous. You were so right in what a connection to nature can do for one's spirit. A 10

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Savita Tyagi 11 June 2016

Thank you so much Kelly. Your comment means so much to me.

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