The Vision Poem by louis rams

The Vision

Rating: 5.0


getting ready to go to bed
a vision came into my head
the vision was quite blurry
so i tried to hurry.

fearful that i might fall
to my wife i did call
as she came running to me
the vision became clear as can be

it was the face of MOTHER MARY
telling me that her son was in pain
seeing all the suffering and all the shame.
the shame that mankinds faith is dwinderling.

and the economy is creating so many doubts
and now is the time to put the doubt out.
so he is coming to rekindle the faith
that seems to be lost
by opening their hearts to a new beginning.
and to show you that through him you are winning.

he has never given up on you
and that's what we should do.
and as this vision started to fade
in me- a new heart was made.

and now that he has rekindled my life
i'll go to bed with my wife
and sleep as comfortable as can be
for i know he's always with me.

i praise the LORD up above
for he has eternal love.
he will never let me down
for he has turned my life around.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 October 2009

Faith faith faith the essence in spirituality well addressed. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Invite you to read and comment: LINGERIE- IG [new post.] Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

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Kranthi Pothineni 15 March 2009

From the start to end you perfectly carry the feel of the poem with a smooth flow of words...nice one.Thanks for sharing.

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Sandra Fowler 14 March 2009

A very spiritual experience. No wonder you wrote a poem about it. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards, Sandra

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