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The Wind: An Extreme Instance

Rating: 5.0

What is the wind? -a flow in many forms,
What the bards have call'd thee
All are their melodious evergreen songs,
As a philocalist I see the wind in me.

Wind, a divine secret agent of the almighty,
Invisibly roaming over seas, soils and nature
For tidings of the colourful world slightly,
And the deeds, white and black of the creatures.

Wind, a messanger, takes the messages fairly
Of innumerable flowers' fragrances,
Sweetness of fruits, melodies of bird-songs, tastes of poetry,
And to the peasants love of animals' disturbances.

Wind, a bondage of love and peace
Amongst the diverse hearts of its creatures,
And for a painter, wind is a moving picture
Of far-fatch'd fields, blue skies and solitary seas.

Wind, a wander'r rolling up the fallen leaves
With her into the spelly paths making sound,
A Sufi singer; the song of herself can be listen'd
In a loud silence all around.

Wind, a great saviour, a transparent shelter,
Creatures, all the three, are under her absent presence,
They find haven in heaven of the lady defender,
The wind is wind, an extreme instance.

Tuesday, January 15, 2019
Wind Poems: 134 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical ,wind
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An idea struck into my mind while commenting on a poem "The Wind" by Elizabeth Padillo Olesen and specially thank you dear madam.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 March 2020

A fabulous extension of Elizabeth Padillo Olesen, " The Wind" . I liked your third stanza most where you perceive wind as the bandage of love and peace! A mangnificent piece of work....brilliantly penned! Top score!

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Thanku Sir! It's inspiring.

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Randhir Kaur 25 December 2019

Wind is a messenger, saviour and bondage of love. It is beautiful to read Jagdish.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 16 January 2020

Thanks for the appreciation dear poet.

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 March 2019

Write comment. Nice poetry, Jagdish. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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me poet yeps poet 31 January 2021

philocalist I see the wind in me MEANS

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me poet yeps poet 26 December 2020

Pahle pyaar ki maiñ ye nishani liye phirta huñ/ Khoon e jigar meiñ jumbish o khoob ru ki ravaani liye phirta huñ| thanks pals

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 December 2020

You made my day with this beautiful poem. My compliments.

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me poet yeps poet 25 December 2020

GR8888888888.....merry xmas to all PH POETS

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Beautiful poem, dear young Poet. The wind is an essential part of our lives.Your poem flows with grace into the various objects of nature. I loved the reference and comparison to the song of a Sufi singer.........10 Thank you Jagdish for visiting my page.

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