The Wings Of My Mind Poem by Dipankar Sadhukhan

The Wings Of My Mind

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I will never get the opportunity
To have your proximity.
So my mind wrapped in agony and pain
Tries to find happiness and peace in vain.

The bird of my mind
Will no longer fly even for a single time
As it has lost the strength to soar
In the sky of your amour.

My longing once filled with dreams
Will not extend their wings.
They will no longer try to move.
They'll not bathe in the showers of your love.

My garment made of Love's sore
Seem to me too heavy to wear.
With the huge load of my cloth
Now I feel too suffocated to breathe.

Dipankar Sadhukhan © 2016

Monday, November 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,longing,love,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2016

The bird of my mind Will no longer fly even for a single time As it has lost the strength to soar In the sky of your amour.... Beautiful metaphor you have painted nicely dear Dipankar, many thanks, keep writing....10

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 09 November 2016

Thank you very much dear poet for your kind comments.

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Seema Devi 11 November 2016

An excellent write with few good images.10

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 13 November 2016

Thank you so much for your kindness dear poetess.

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Baharak Barzin 12 November 2016

A true sense of love

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Richard Wlodarski 31 January 2017

The title, imagery, style and writing are par excellence. Expression of emotion is so deep. Brilliant work, Dipankar.

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Kiran Mishra 05 December 2016

An excellent poem of lost love.10

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Manira Khan 22 November 2016

Beautiful metaphor. An excellent write.....10

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Valsa George 17 November 2016

A poem expressing your dejection and sorrow over lost love....! Powerful and passionate!

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 13 November 2016

Thank you so much dear poetess Ging Taping for your kind words on my poem.

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