The Winter Sun Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Winter Sun

Rating: 5.0


Don’t leave me alone,
Come on, come on, I need your heating,
In the hot summers
You come too early not pleasant at all,
Even if I open my eyes, you don’t look into it,
And the pleasure you give through your hot warm rays,
Erases all illusions of the cold long night,
I don’t need a shining moon and twinkling stars,
I don’t want to travel on a Milky Way,
Do whatever you like with the buds and leaves,
And the sun flower,
I am travelling on gem packed road,
I have to reach the place of my work in time,
I have to work hard and earn the bread,
For me and my family,
I need your heat, I need you light,
The fog is dense, visibility is low,
Why you are lazy like a man too old,
It’s not good to leave the bed so late,
Shine, shine more and more, kill the fog,
Thank you very much visibility is now fine,
Have a nice time with the lovely sun flower!

Wednesday, August 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sunshine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2015

Marvellous depiction with excellent phraseology. Amusing one......10

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Kelly Kurt 19 August 2015

Another delightful poem. Anthropomorphizing the sun and lamenting seasonal variances

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Bisma Mirza 19 August 2015

Beautiful poem really!!! Bravo ..... 10 on 10

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Rajnish Manga 19 August 2015

The winter morning sun is perfectly warm and soothing. The poem presents the atmosphere meticulously when the office goers are waiting for the fog to lift by a bright sunlight. The way in which the poet has questioned the intentions of the sun is amazing: The fog is dense, visibility is low, Why you are lazy like a man too old,

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 August 2015

A nice description...............................10

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