Friday, May 29, 2009

The Wishing Well Comments

Rating: 5.0

At the bottom of the wishing well
A penny lies in water,
Dropped there by a little girl
A soldier's only daughter,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 21 June 2009

Lovely gentle storyline, with joy and sadness, hope and tears. Nice interesting verses each one well presented. I enjoyed the reading. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Sameer Ahmed 06 June 2009

A poem depicting a very firm and natural bondage between a Father and a Daughter. The way it took a turn in the middle conveys a very strong message of sticking to your hopes for one never knows when and where wishes come true? ....10/10

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Ann Beard 29 May 2009

Hallo Andrew. Great poem, a tender and haunting story. regards Ann,

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