Patience is the first learnt habbit from you
But short temperness is through heridity.
Your desire to contribute your level best to the needy;
taught me offering helping hand to the needy.
Your stubborn nature:
Led to introspect.
Your comparisions, hurted me many times
but led to have fellowship with GOD.
Your guidence:
paved the path for destiny!
Though we are far apart you are always in my heart;
Blinking eyes, threatening looks, frightening teeth!
very sweet to have them.
These are the words i feel like sharing with you:
But silence takes over it when we are together.
My heart cannot weigh them any longer,
Hence i present my heart to you on the eve of your B'day!
These are the words i feel like sharing with you: But silence takes over it when we are together. My heart cannot weigh them any longer, Hence i present my heart to you on the eve of your B'day! It is nice to empty your heart at an opportune time! It will definitely make the other happy! A very thoughtful gift on one's birthday whom you love and whose life has influenced you in many ways!
Nicely done. I love the amount of heart you shown. Especially giving one of the best gifts you can give on ones birthday! Lol :) . If anything great piece overall! There are a few spelling mistakes but granted great job!
Who is that sweet-bitter friend Queeny. Good one. But check on some small errors.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
My heart cannot weigh them any longer! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.