The Yesterday's Bride Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

The Yesterday's Bride

Rating: 5.0


So has become sad
The yesterday's bride,
As the cherry garden
After harvesting...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 25 September 2008

My friend that as brought a nice smile to my face Chris and you take care lady x

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Ivan Donn Carswell 26 September 2008

This powerfully suggestive metaphor is expressed quite delicately. Well done! Rgds, Ivan

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Kesav Easwaran 27 September 2008

A nice metaphor in just four lines, beautifully suggestive, as Ivan commented...10

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Alison Cassidy 28 September 2008

This has all the subtlety and eloquence of a Haiku poem. Beautiful. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 October 2008

Only 10 for this amazing moving composition, lovely.

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Fay Slimm 15 January 2009

Has a sadness all of it's own Tsira - - and told in so few words too...... lovely....10 from Fay...xxx

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Tsira, Soft and so lovely...like jam on hot bread!

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Tom Balch 09 October 2008

So deep so few, a well penned piece 10+ regards Tom

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John Tiong Chunghoo 07 October 2008

wow, that's deep. good one tsira.

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Lynda Robson 07 October 2008

I like this a lot, it says a lot in so few words, 10 Lynda xx

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