Theory Of Time Poem by me poet yeps poet

Theory Of Time

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Theory of Time

Sorry for butting in,
If I may be permitted to,
As a scientist more
Than a toddler poet,
Daring to tread through
The poetic treadmill,
Besides stalwarts,
Not knowing much of the nuances of poetry,
None the less,
I may continue,
If you do permit

Firstly,
I may suggest,
We all read the book on time
Brief History of Time
By Stephen Hawkings

Secondly,
Science and Spirituality are at variance.
Science is mathematical vision,
Like the actual fact the earth
Wobbles around the sun
The number of full moons one sees,
In a life time,
Subscribe to the basic element of Time
Scientifically adopted,
From sunrise to sunrise
And
Today the Zodiac,
Which is over 2000 years old?
Ensures the return of the sun,
Having moved up from Cancer
Down to the Tropic of Capricorn,
And back
Which is not at all cyclic?
Also GMT was introduced
About 100years ago,
When air travel came to life

As far as Spiritualism is concerned,
I am hardly any body to comment,
But all spirituality should be reserved,
For afterlife,
When we all are safely deposited in heaven
On terra firma let's be pragmatic human beings,
All poets are a part of existentialism.

Hope my intrusion,
Justifies my intention,
Of not intruding in the domain,
Where I continue to
An infant,
A baby still remain.

Saturday, July 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
TIME FACTUAL INTELLIGENCE REAL SPIRITUAL AFTERWARDS
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 06 July 2019

What an amazing homage to the Rock of Ages meets the Age of Rocks! Superbly done, Poet!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2019

HI MJL , , , , I HAVE A LONG WAY TO ETERNITY SHALL ONE DAY IF NOT TODAY WITH ALL YOUR BLESSINGS STEP IN THANKS FOR YOUR KINDNESS

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Anjandev Roy 06 July 2019

Wonderful. Wise representation. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2019

HIGH ARRRRRRRRRRRRR , , , , I HAVE A LONG WAY TO ETERNITY SHALL ONE DAY IF NOT TODAY WITH ALL YOUR BLESSINGS STEP IN THANKS FOR YOUR KINDNESS

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Akhtar Jawad 06 July 2019

Time is infinite and we are finite. There is no harm in being spiritual.

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Douglas Scotney 06 July 2019

Modest to the end yep yep

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 July 2019

A magnificent poetic expression.....10++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2019

, , , , I HAVE A LONG WAY TO ETERNITY SHALL ONE DAY IF NOT TODAY WITH ALL YOUR BLESSINGS STEP IN THANKS FOR YOUR KINDNESS

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