Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

There Should Be No Doubt About It - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

There should be no doubt about it.
You don't have to pout about it.
Or commute a brooding mood.
To allude with attitude.

You,
Have chosen to bear that load.

There should be no doubt about it.
You don't have to pout about it.
Or commute a brooding mood,
To allude with attitude.

You,
Have chosen to bear that load.
And you,
Have chosen to...
Not-let-go!

There should be no doubt about it.
There's no need to pout about it.
You,
Have chosen to bear that load.
There should be no doubt about it.
You...
Have chosen to,
Not-let-go!

You don't have to pout about it.
Or commute a brooding mood,
To allude with attitude.
You,
Have chosen to bear that load.
And you,
Have chosen to...
Not-let-go!
Refusing.


Comments about There Should Be No Doubt About It by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • (5/25/2012 11:26:00 PM)


    A great epic truthful poem.N one says it better than you.During this read you took me on a journey to discover this fantastic truths...for free! I enjoyed the free ride.I shall come back again.To learn some more.Thank you.You're the fantastic guide and teacher. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 23, 2012


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