Suresh Kumar EK

They Don't

When I am here
Walking alone near
They don't see you walking
Along with me, oh my dear.

When they follow me
They don't see the halo
Of you circling me around
My face and looks, oh my dear.

When they surround me
They don't feel the real
Vibrations of our intense
Desire in the air, oh my dear


When I talk to them
They can't hear my inner
Voice, soft and calm, that is
Of love, is tuned for you, my dear

When I take my breath
They don't identify that
You are close to me, than
My deeper pulses, oh my dear

When I am dissolved again
In the deep thinking mood
They don't know about the vast
Ocean of feelings in me, my dear.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 17, 2020
Poem Edited: Thursday, September 17, 2020

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Comments about They Don't by Suresh Kumar EK

  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (9/17/2020 10:33:00 AM)

    When I take my breath
    They don't identify that
    You are close to me, than
    My deeper pulses, oh my dear
    ....the utmost love....excellent expression

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (9/17/2020 10:25:00 AM)

    Cont....2
    One version of my interpretation is what I felt like and the other one could be your lover is conversing with you and telling I am so beautiful that all eyes are on me and people are fascinated by my charm to such an extent that they don't see you exist or they ignore your presence.5 Stars

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (9/17/2020 10:23:00 AM)

    Another fantastic poem on love. We in human form have some inherent and inbuilt qualities we have conscience, which guides us to the right and the correct path, whereas we also have devil who try to deviate us from the correct path and love has to pass through this test. What others see in us is what they are hence time and again we struggle to make them realise what we are. This is a thought provoking poem and can be interpreted in different ways.

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