Time Poem by Suresh Kumar EK

Time

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There existed
No time for me
Before I met
You.

I was living
In a vacuum
Without getting
A space in
Your heart.

We met
And the time
Changed.
You filled
All the spaces
For me.

Then I wandered
Through the
Infinite interiors
With the wings of
Rainbows made by
Your magical fingers.

My time
Became unending
Passionate, infinite
Flew beyond horizons.

While we cross
The ocean of love
We lost the way
And soon separated
By violent waves of fate.

I couldn't find you
I was drowned deep
Drowned to the bottom
Of the ocean of feelings
And the Time stands still
Here without you dear.

Thursday, October 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 01 October 2020

Beautiful. The flow the story gripping to the end short rhythmic phrases....hmmmmm....they could do with a nice 1 2 3 4 beat

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 October 2020

The time of love is very short seemingly though years after years are passing But time of suffering is very long though it's going thru very short moment!

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Sk Nambiar 24 December 2020

love and time becomes relative in this beautiful poem

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Sk Nambiar 24 December 2020

After we met evrything changed.

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Sk Nambiar 24 December 2020

Before we met, there existed no time

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Soran M. H 02 October 2020

Time is one of the secrets of existence. Einstein wanted to know its origin but passed away. Here in this poem, the focus is on the other person through time. Sometimes the poet loses himself and his existence in order to know the meaning of life, it is amazing topic, well done.

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Soran M. H 02 October 2020

I couldn't find you I was drowned deep Drowned to the bottom Of the ocean of feelings And the Time stands still Here without you dear.

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