Thick Of Tongue Poem by Julia Luber

Thick Of Tongue

Rating: 5.0


They Chose to not understand what Satire is or: IF
Logos to all material would end up not only simply too hard, but also too stiff.

And Chose to create zombies, as if being in adulation of them:
Deciding what is allowed to be said, and deciding what should be considered sin.

Not contemplating who in Flesh and Blood
Had been constricted in their acts.

Feeling thick of tongue, and body of thud-
and where the rule shudders and cracks.

Not examining how gravity functions through time-
In beg of a reaction, To undo that secret crime!

Of a love that promised Nothing to anyone else.
Which existed only for that one night.
Like nothing really lived nor nothing really felt.

As anything more than a monument for which it stood.

Only love-not creation, not identification, nor any specific work of clearly good.

So haul out the shackles and step up the muzzles.
Let words be drunk for their googles and guzzles.

Set up the sinkage for gravity's linkage to replace
The grimaces, the guffaws, and those awful looks on their face.

Oh, how sick in reflection and wrong in rejection and cruel in subjection.
Oh, how mean and how cruel and how wrong!

Thursday, June 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: didactic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An chapter wrap up from The Afterlach saga series; they are becoming zombies from shock not only towards an estranging culture, but realizing what they were put through by their own back home.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Oh, how sick in reflection and wrong in rejection and cruel in subjection. Oh, how mean and how cruel and how wrong! Powerful poem with bold words, strong and decisive. Julia, i liked this poem for its exposition of what a tongue is capable of. It can whip and rip one apart. Great sense of Rhythm.........10

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Julia Luber 17 June 2019

I love how the audio says " oh" on this……priceless.

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Julia Luber 13 June 2019

Interesting. Feel the thud!

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Jane Campion 13 June 2019

Imaginative and out there.Just as poetry shoud be.

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Julia Luber 13 June 2019

I appreciate your responses on my poetry.

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Julia Luber 13 June 2019

I always appreciate your comments and compliments!

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