Thin Air Poem by Leanna Page Markgraf

Thin Air

Rating: 5.0


To keep me sane
I must go on without you.
But believe me when I say
It's a tough act to go through.

I think about you always
Wonder how you have been.
You just kept pushing me away
when I begged to be let in.

But love cannot be forced
Perhaps you are scared.
I know you have been hurt before
But never so much have I cared.

Sometimes though when you care too much
You must set yourself free.
And so that is what I must do now,
to try and keep the peace.

I will always love you
And if you ever need me, I'll be there.
Now I'll keep my distance
And disappear into thin air.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Congratulations, Dear poet. This beautiful poem is the POEM OF THE DAY-MEMBERS today. Well done

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Bri Edwards 16 March 2023

I wonder if it is something you've really experienced or if it's from your imagination, : )

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Bri Edwards 16 March 2023

This contains NO rhyming (i THINK) , NO alliterations (i THINK) , it's not acrostic, nor a limerick, BUT.....I love it. Good advice. I wonder if it is something you've really experienced

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Jordane Parkes 16 March 2023

Wow, this is a preety good poem

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D.N. Rebb 16 March 2023

Congrats on POD! I hear Bonnie Raitt singing this (I can't make you love me) . You captured the pain of love beautifully (ironic)

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2. Beautifully crafted.. "Now I will keep my distance/ And disappear into thin air"…

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