Third Testament Poem by Chan Mongol

Third Testament

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Too much motion and force in mighty water,
haven't you known power in the soil, air and fire?

They follow rules, certain order;
they even repair own dents, so far!

In our delicate life form and frame,
we see influence from them.

They give us things proportionate,
their correct mathematics decide our fate,

Their network isn't our system or IT;
without our science, they just do it.

Ancient people were pundits and were deep,
they found god's agentsand start to worship.

Charity starts from own humble home,
definitely, not from Cairo, Tokyo, Rome!

So, if you can't respect water, soil, air, fire here;
How can you respect directly the biggest star?

Disrespecting god given elements in this planet, here;
I don't think they can't reach god who is too far!

I am not bringing up the 3rdTestament or a new bible,
Mine has the connectivity with what is practical, real!

Agents work hard to repair man made occurrence,
they balance conditions in their extremeviolence.

Such immediate creators don't deserve our abuse,
after tolerating much, they make huge news!

Rain, heat, flood, tsunami, cold, snow;
drastic weather are their voices to say, no!

Wednesday, December 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 19 December 2018

excellent poem on belief-disbelief through natural elements /// greatly vivid written, enjoyed I

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