This Love Isn'T Easy Comments

thank u everyone! n LOL ernest! : P thnx for being so sweet! n yes people i'l try to improve my writings! :)

people help me i forgot my email id! i need to write more poems too! : (help me plzzzz! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Wow wow can u be mine lol. Promise i never hurt. Its a wonderful work pls write more i cnt stop reading

Wow wow can u be mine lol. Promise i never hurt. Its a wonderful work pls write more i cnt stop reading

neatly written my dear keep writing endlessly, with such passion and you will bear me witness my dear, other have a lovely day!

This is a good start! Keep going!

Give some time to your love. there aremor to happen. Read my poems to throb your heart more.

I like it! A lovely poem about first love! Just remember love always comes and goes, you'll find the right one for you someday! ! !

good for your first write. that is exactly what its for is getting thoughts out and expressing yourself. summed up id say this is great work and you have real potential. keep writing

its beautiful, smart, lovable, and yet poignant too.... the words are beautifully put.....great work for first poem....hope to read more work from you.....thanks for sharing

ah young love, full of emotions, longings and frustration toward the end. you have expressed your feelings well, not bad for starters but you need some rework on structure and the flow of words to make it an enjoyable read. keep writing my dear!

it's a great poem, the idea is there, just work on the flow of things...just keep on writing, i would love to hear more from you.

I like it. Need to work on the flow but its a great first poem :)