This Torn Universe...... Poem by RIC BASTASA

This Torn Universe......

Rating: 5.0


poetry always starts
from a personal experience.
it is like a rib taken
from you and you feel that
emptiness after the poem
is drawn into another paper
like another soul.

it is like a dove from your
hand which you set free and
then it hovers in a tree and
looks at you. This time is
becomes another being and you
become strangers looking at
each other unable to remember
what happened before.

it becomes the bird of another
hand, that sets it free again,
until it becomes the universal
dove for all, and then you rest
on an easy chair looking at the
sky beyond your window feeling
the fullness of humanity where
you will always be a patch
in the cloth of this torn
universe.

Thursday, October 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 02 November 2019

A remarkable write, taking the reader on a journey to poetry creation.... a unique experience that a writer feels.10+

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Tulsi Shrestha 01 November 2019

Intense and powerful creation with fragrance of metaphors. Beautiful penned

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Sandra Feldman 01 November 2019

A magnificent masterpiece, describing the birth and life of a poem. Unique, capturing the depth and life in poetry writing, the feeling produced when written and then when it lives on its own. The comparisons, given are highly poetic and incomparably descriptive. The best I have ever read! A poem to be admired, read and never forgotten!

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