Twilight Whispers

Rookie (30th November 1991 / Wolverhampton)

Thought No.4 - Someone Out There Misses You - Poem by Twilight Whispers

Someone out there misses you
like you would miss the sun if
It suddenly stopped shining
Proudly in the sky.

Someone out there misses you
like you would miss the sweet
smells of summer as the daffodils
Flower into tulips which wink when you pass.

Someone out there misses you
like you would miss the snow at
Christmas time, even though the
snow is seldom seen in your home thesedays.

Someone out there misses you
like I miss the beautiful scents of autumn
The damp leaves floating on the frosted
Ice of the pond down the lane that
used to be quiet until people
Decided to use is as a teenage hangout.

I miss her,
but she is not here anymore.


Comments about Thought No.4 - Someone Out There Misses You by Twilight Whispers

  • Emily Oldham (9/20/2008 7:22:00 AM)

    this is a beautiful poem, thanks (Report)Reply

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  • (1/17/2008 11:21:00 AM)

    This is especially lovely. You've used some grand imagery here to bring your thoughts to life. HG: -) xx (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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