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Thoughts Commit Suicide Or Die As A Result

That rock of suicide never commits suicide Simply because it can not do this anytime and No one dared to commit suicide from its top anytime, but Some people greatly threw their pretty thoughts Into that blue sea that stands in front of it... If someone accidentally falls From the top of that rock of suicide, then People will say that he has committed suicide For any reason... Some people fall accidentally from their Houses' balconies, then People will say that they have committed suicide... Those who commit suicide have the intention to do this, but A few accidentally fall and people think that these are Attempts of committing suicide anytime... When people commit suicide, then All their thoughts commit suicide... Some people will not believe those who fell accidentally and Later died because of their fall, but They will this is a clear suicide... Committing suicide is against everyone and is Against everything, but If someone falls accidentally, then Then this another thing... committing suicide and when falling accidentally, then Those thoughts commit suicide or they die later on... Just different ways of death... When we pass away, then All our thoughts, which we carry inside us , Vanish immediately... ______________________________________________________________________

Monday, October 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 October 2014

A clear distinction has been made between thoughts though different consents might ensue while relating misfortunes......Very nicely composed

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