Thoughts Wanting To Be Saved Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Thoughts Wanting To Be Saved



Thoughts running around, wanting to be saved through-
out eternity in my mind, not realizing that I won't
be here forever.
Insisting that I write them down so they can at least
live forever on pages of many books to be shared with
the entire world.
Looking into myself, wondering if I need someone to
save me from myself, as I'm going under and I don't
care to come up again.
Drowning in a life that I don't want to really live
here on earth, preferring to enter heaven and be done
with all this suffering once and for all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elisabeth Wingle 14 February 2016

This spoke to me, I have felt the same urgency, followed by thoughts of who really cares? Of course you have said it more eloquently than I. I hope this is not to personal but I get the feeling you are Ill? I have that takes one to know one feeling. Maybe I read to much into this poem. Lovely poem.. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Lisa

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