Thoughts Wanting To Be Saved Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Thoughts Wanting To Be Saved



Thoughts running around, wanting to be saved through-
out eternity in my mind, not realizing that I won't
be here forever.
Insisting that I write them down so they can at least
live forever on pages of many books to be shared with
the entire world.
Looking into myself, wondering if I need someone to
save me from myself, as I'm going under and I don't
care to come up again.
Drowning in a life that I don't want to really live
here on earth, preferring to enter heaven and be done
with all this suffering once and for all.

Thursday, February 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: books,running
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elisabeth Wingle 14 February 2016

This spoke to me, I have felt the same urgency, followed by thoughts of who really cares? Of course you have said it more eloquently than I. I hope this is not to personal but I get the feeling you are Ill? I have that takes one to know one feeling. Maybe I read to much into this poem. Lovely poem.. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Lisa

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