Three Words Or Is It Five Words? Poem by David Harris

Three Words Or Is It Five Words?

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Those three little words you say,
I love you,
brings a face full of smiles,
and happiness to my world.
However, those five words you say,
I don’t want you anymore,
brings eyes full of tears,
and sorrow, sadness and fears

Thursday, May 17, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,sorrow,words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
JoAnn McGrath 17 May 2007

Hmmmmm...I think I'll say goodnight here on this one because I'm loss for words

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 May 2007

David... Are we Positive and negative here, always be positive my friend..10

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Ahhhhh....David, i think you have just perfectly re-defined the dueling masks of the opera...aka.... :) ....) : . Ilike this a lot..Succinctly profound work. FjR

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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