Metro Lines make sense
comfy, fast, efficient
in one short sentence.
to switch from roads it is meant
car be at home, no more dents
last mile? don't bother
self-driven scooters for hire
smile and drive, rather
eased road traffic won't tire
kids, sick, bus, police and fire
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
an incredibly complex and strict poetic form artfully measured and sketched. Tanka for your courage and execution!
Tanka for your comments, dear poet!
Thank you, dear Poet Doug Bentley! Your comments are fabulous and poetic! .