Thumbs Up For India's Metro Lines Poem by narayana aghalaya

Thumbs Up For India's Metro Lines



Metro Lines make sense
comfy, fast, efficient
in one short sentence.
to switch from roads it is meant
car be at home, no more dents

last mile? don't bother
self-driven scooters for hire
smile and drive, rather
eased road traffic won't tire
kids, sick, bus, police and fire

Sunday, February 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: travel,city
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Metro Lines in major Indian cities have been a great boon to city commuters. They are fast, efficient, clean, comfortable and relatively cheap.they are meant to ease road traffic. Last mile connectivity are being provided by self-driven scootersand cars and also hired taxies like Uber, Ola etc. it will take some more time to settle down and cover remote areas of city.But it is surely a great gift!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doug Bentley 24 February 2019

an incredibly complex and strict poetic form artfully measured and sketched. Tanka for your courage and execution!

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Narayana Aghalaya 24 February 2019

Tanka for your comments, dear poet!

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Narayana Aghalaya 24 February 2019

Thank you, dear Poet Doug Bentley! Your comments are fabulous and poetic! .

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