Siblings Poem by narayana aghalaya

Siblings

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siblings are God's gifts
when together, spirits soar
let there be no rift

Saturday, March 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: siblings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Siblings play a very important and positive role in our lives. They are God's gifts. In this equation, we have an equally important role.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 17 October 2019

A beautiful and well thought out haiku.................................................................

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

Meaningful senry; says it all in three lines. Thanks Nara

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Narayana Aghalaya 29 March 2018

Thanks for your appreciation of a few of my poems -today -Mr.Loke Kok Yee

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 March 2018

Absolutely, Siblings are God's gifts and they develop a different kind of intimacy by virtue of their resemblance of characteristics! A beautiful Haku! Loved reading it!

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narayana aghalaya 28 March 2018

Thanks for liking some of my poems today. Your comments encourage me to do better next time!

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Valsa George 27 March 2018

Indeed..... a blessing! They are our most intimate companions, sharing almost the same traits! How blessed is a home where there is no rift, and only love among siblings! A beautiful Haiku (10)

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Narayana Aghalaya 27 March 2018

I have my lovely siblings and their company I just love!

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