Tie Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Tie

Rating: 5.0


Let me cut the cord
Of your kindness
Though I’m blind
Living in blindness
I will tie the cord
Make it smaller
My love, my lord
I need your color!

(2008/4/21)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 28 April 2008

So beautiful, Persian Nightingale! Please, keep on writing so beautifully :)

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Ursula Tillmann 23 April 2008

I really like your NEW poems. Simplicity with lots of depth. Great. Thanks for your kind remarks about some of my work.

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Tsira Goge 22 April 2008

It is the courageous romantic demand, nightingale... , beautifully write

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Thad Wilk 21 April 2008

Tie and shorten the cord, get closer to your love, your lord. Great read Shiraz! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Lynda Robson 21 April 2008

Nice writing, thanks for sharing it with us all, Lynda x

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