Ardent Love Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Ardent Love

Rating: 3.5


Be my apostrophe before S
I'll second that motion
The possession beyond space and time
When the nude love swims in our notion

Give me a glass of wine darling
A glass of love potion
No I need more ecstasy
A dropp of your eyes' ocean

(2008/12/28)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
<font color =fusha>Amy 02 August 2009

Very nicely put true passion :) nice write

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 July 2009

very romantic...flows with passion... finely written love is...flowing.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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To love someone special with a love as deep as the ocean in that person's soul is one of life's greatest shared gifts.This is very beautiful.A ten! ! ! ! !

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

oh god so so wonderful 10

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sumaira .....ir 07 January 2009

It's a lovely poem which touches my heart....

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Lovely poem of love and passion.. nice one

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 December 2018

No I need more ecstasy A dropp of your eyes' ocean. very romantic to the point of becoming. thanku dear poet. tony

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 29 December 2014

Give me a glass of wine darling A glass of love potion No I need more ecstasy A droop of your eyes' ocean Beautifully composed love poem.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid khan

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Mihaela Pirjol 18 July 2014

A lovely poem, a truly ardent love expressed in a unique style.I love it! Thank you.

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

When the nude love swims in our notion Rachel Ann Butler

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