Per. Nig.


Gaza - Poem by Per. Nig.

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We don't listen to them shouting for aid
Though for our life we're so afraid

The swollen rivers their home flood
They speak in crimson accented blood

(2009/1/8)

Topic(s) of this poem: war


Comments about Gaza by Per. Nig.

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (7/13/2014 1:47:00 AM)


    beautiful choice of words.. it flashes the love against all odds and eveil (Report) Reply

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  • (1/26/2010 9:58:00 AM)


    what i like most about ur poems is the choice of words, ,
    U cab exrpress many things, show deeep feelings or concern about something
    within just few lines, , , , ,
    Well done
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  • (2/5/2009 10:59:00 AM)


    well talk about dark....i love it


    ♥ trevor adams♥
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  • (1/22/2009 10:15:00 AM)


    a twin couplet, brilliance in composition...you have said it in a so heartfelt opus with a brevity of structure.10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/22/2009 12:09:00 AM)


    whatta wonderful lines....it consits of few wrds but conquers the whole human race....so beautiful to read, , not confusing...undersatndable, , , I LIKE THS...
    NAIZZ
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  • (1/21/2009 5:26:00 PM)


    Problem is, we don't learn anything from history... (Report) Reply

  • (1/21/2009 4:24:00 PM)


    This is really amazing! ! (Report) Reply

  • (1/19/2009 8:12:00 AM)


    reflexion of a moment in time, great thoughful job. (Report) Reply

  • (1/18/2009 1:35:00 PM)


    The nightmare is beautifully expressed,
    Deb
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  • (1/18/2009 1:48:00 AM)


    powerful words indeed. wonderfully done (Report) Reply

  • (1/18/2009 1:33:00 AM)


    whoa, amazing how something so amzing can be translated into such little words.... wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2009 8:50:00 PM)


    This new poem is very good.
    There's always hope for everything.
    Although, it's good to be realistic
    when something's already done.
    There's a time to go around and get ahead
    with what you got too.
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  • (1/17/2009 11:08:00 AM)


    For them it is
    Fireworks
    For us
    It is
    A flow
    Of river
    In blood
    And blasts
    For them
    It is
    A news
    For us
    Any Shelter?
    .................................
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  • (1/17/2009 6:03:00 AM)


    Man heart has become a bleeding river
    Through broken hopes that can't deliver

    Our times are now only salty tears
    Plunged promises that no one adheres
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  • (1/17/2009 5:15:00 AM)


    Thank you very much...it is an expressive poem. I hope it will become more than twenty lines, but few expressive words are better than a hail of meaningless ones. (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2009 2:24:00 AM)


    lovely write, , , very nice...we are afraid even to help...true (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2009 10:54:00 PM)


    thats nice and kool. very nice (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2009 2:43:00 PM)


    Our heart with Gaza, may the get peace soon, well write (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2009 12:34:00 PM)


    So true I will sign up for peace anyday. (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2009 1:14:00 AM)


    short and to the point...true, true, we will always sacrifice others before we fling ourselves into danger, such is the selfishness of modern people...war is and has always been a terrrible issue, both now and in the past...nicely written...
    Leslie Ching
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, December 22, 2014


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