Arca nus


Till You Hit The Ground - Poem by Arca nus

The twist of life never fails to surprise me,
even the one's who are hidden, they all agree,
they grow and grow, until no more,
and provoked others to go with the flow,

Is this how it should be?
life ablaze or just serenity,
the burning passion, the painful glee,
life's not always what it seems to be.

It will continue to cripple you down,
it will never stop until you frown,
and then you win, you get the crown,
you can't win without fighting,
till you hit the ground

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Till You Hit The Ground by Arca nus

  • Chinedu Dike (9/4/2015 6:37:00 PM)


    To conceive of life without difficulties is indeed an existential absurdity. Where the going gets tough, we always see the tough get going. A good piece of poetry bristling with insight. I like the rhyme scheme of the Poe and the poet's conviction. Thanks for sharing Arca. (Report) Reply

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  • Incognito Pseudonymosx (9/1/2015 4:20:00 AM)


    Thank you :) i really appreciate your comment (Report) Reply

  • Incognito Pseudonymosx (9/1/2015 4:19:00 AM)


    Thank you :) i really appreciate the comment (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (8/29/2015 9:44:00 PM)


    a well penned poem indeed.. only 15 but you write better than many 'mature poet'.. ;) (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/29/2015 10:06:00 AM)


    A life lesson in a wonderful poem (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (8/29/2015 6:22:00 AM)


    let life continues, very fine one, go on.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 29, 2015



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