Time Poem by Luz Hanaii

Time

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Time chews us up and when he takes the flavor out, he spits
us out like a wrinkled up gum.

Tuesday, June 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: experience,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 15 June 2019

Hahahaha brilliant imagery! I truly enjoyed it, thank you dear Luz, it also reminded me words of a dear aunt, who used to say that wrinkles are god's gift, proof of how long we lived.

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Luz Hanaii 07 June 2019

Some people get chewed up by more than others. You look great for your age, same as me. Glad time hasn't chewed us too much. lol Thank you for your comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 June 2019

You experience on time is well crafted. Short and valuable. Thanks for sharing.

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