Bella Swan


Time - Poem by Bella Swan

Time passes like a mirage
One minute its there, another its
gone.

Time feels like its drifting away
But you come to realize that its
only lingering on.

Time is a poison.
Have a little too much of it and you
feel like your suffocating.


April 8,2008
Bella Swan


Comments about Time by Bella Swan

  • (7/23/2008 2:07:00 PM)


    Did you copy that idea from 'New Moon'? 'Time passes. Even when it seems impossible. Even when each trick of the second hand aches like a pulse behind a bruise. It passes unevenly in strange lurches and dragging lulls. But pass it does. Even for me.' Had I not read the book, i would have said that this is deep. But it seems as if you copied the idea so i don't think much of it except that you re-thought the idea and tried to reword it... didn't quite strike a 10 for me. but not too bad.
    Try harder. Go deeper. Be YOU.
    good luck.
    Elizabeth
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  • Chan Jee (4/8/2008 9:54:00 PM)


    i think you tried to awakened the people from sleeping.you tried to understand poeple how time is important.we should take respect of it.
    you have nice thoughts
    you are precious
    thanks
    bye
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008


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