Fireflies Die Poem by Susan Williams

Fireflies Die

Rating: 4.9


Fireflies die
Stars wink out of existence
Butterflies fall from the sky
Rivers take the path of least resistance
And so do you and I.
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~~~~~~~© by susan williams, April 9,2016

Sunday, April 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,existence,life,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

Beautifully expressed in just a few words...a poem worthy of profuse admirations!

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Rebecca Navarre 16 August 2022

This is so heart touching and filled with such deep thoughtful sorrow and yet is expressed with such a mesmerizing beauty that's captivating! .. Beyond #'S! ...+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 27 August 2022

thank you, Rebecca, you always uplift me!

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Susan Williams 27 August 2022

Rebecca--you make my efforts worth while--what would PoemHunters do without such eager and attentive souls] thank you so much

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 July 2022

Stars wink out of existence/Butterflies fall from the sky.....lovely imagery! A great poem.

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Thank you my friend for reading my poetry and finding loveliness in them.

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Tom Allport 08 July 2022

A wonderful truthful write!

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Hey, Tom! It is good to see your face and hear your words --I have been gone for so long---I can't wait to go check out what you've written lately! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2022

A masterpiece! I will remember this perceptive work forever! !

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Susan Williams 27 August 2022

Dr Dillip----sometimes I am pleased more with my poems that point out that brevity has a place in writing! ! !

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