Stars wink out of existence
Butterflies fall from the sky
Rivers take the path of least resistance
And so do you and I.
~~~~~~~© by susan williams, April 9,2016
Beautifully expressed in just a few words...a poem worthy of profuse admirations!
This is so heart touching and filled with such deep thoughtful sorrow and yet is expressed with such a mesmerizing beauty that's captivating! .. Beyond #'S! ...+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
thank you, Rebecca, you always uplift me!
Rebecca--you make my efforts worth while--what would PoemHunters do without such eager and attentive souls] thank you so much
Stars wink out of existence/Butterflies fall from the sky.....lovely imagery! A great poem.
Thank you my friend for reading my poetry and finding loveliness in them.
A wonderful truthful write!
Hey, Tom! It is good to see your face and hear your words --I have been gone for so long---I can't wait to go check out what you've written lately! !
A masterpiece! I will remember this perceptive work forever! !
Dr Dillip----sometimes I am pleased more with my poems that point out that brevity has a place in writing! ! !
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