Time And Time Again Poem by Reshma Ramesh

I liked the last three words' our whole life a lie' ofcourse thats right this life is not the actual life we are living with our daily routines and professional duties to carry on, beyond this there is something real which we have to discover. I really appreciate you for this work which is not so bombastic but i could rate ur poem as 'simply the best'. I liked the rhythmic expressions of your poem which is nice, while reading it sounds like singing a song.....

Very original and prifessional pen, reshma, , away from the sentiments, it makes you ponder, , a 10

The highs and lows of life pounds like the tides.....God never gives us more than we can handle.........but God comes so close sometime almost to your breaking point.....is it a test? ....it is to make us stroger? ...i Don't know...but i do know this i will never give up.....surfs up grab a board and lets ride ! ! ! ! ! ! .... A very beautiful poem....so so very well writing....as always 10+++++++++++++

that is the real game of time and space of cyclic order as when ordained, truth yet not delved from the hue of rainbow, wonderfful query by the quet as unanswered, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing