Time Out. Poem by guy lipmore

Time Out.

Rating: 5.0


Soul destroyed, pride almost gone.
Unemployed, for eternally long.
Time caught up with skills of old,
Mind and body, not enough against the modern world.

DEC' 1990

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Velvet Bloodlust 20 September 2012

December 1990? That's when I was born. Implying you are old and used up.

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John Maxwell 26 August 2012

It's a fast and furious field we're in. Nice write.

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Romeo Della Valle 26 August 2012

Deep and powerful few words that are clearly thought provoking! I have felt that way many times in my turbulent life but I always found also the ways to stay afloat and move on. If you read my poem titled: Never Giving Up you would get an idea of how I fought back circumstances and won! Great work dear Guy! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City!

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