Time Slips Through Poem by Heather Burns

Time Slips Through

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The foundation
is cracked
letting time
slip through.

A flood of
memories
approach the
shore
raindrops keep
falling
touching thoughts
haunting her
existence.

Friday, July 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: flood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 28 July 2013

so nice is the poem for its beauty lies in tone and sweet words.. like it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 July 2013

Beautiful images nicely presented. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2013

Powerful imaginary thoughts...Still haunting her existence, though the foundations is cracked...Different thoughts are coming to my mind...Very Beautiful and I liked it...

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Sekharan Pookkat 27 July 2013

Time slips Thoughts breaks Vision fads Existence questions Priority changes.

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Nader Baheri 27 July 2013

powerful imaginary thoghts.~nb

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