Friday, July 26, 2013

Time Slips Through Comments

Rating: 4.0

The foundation
is cracked
letting time
slip through.
...
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Heather Burns
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Wahab Abdul 28 July 2013

so nice is the poem for its beauty lies in tone and sweet words.. like it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 July 2013

Beautiful images nicely presented. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2013

Powerful imaginary thoughts...Still haunting her existence, though the foundations is cracked...Different thoughts are coming to my mind...Very Beautiful and I liked it...

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Sekharan Pookkat 27 July 2013

Time slips Thoughts breaks Vision fads Existence questions Priority changes.

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Nader Baheri 27 July 2013

powerful imaginary thoghts.~nb

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