Like a blow with a fist
That moment I knew
What you did then
And contnue to do
In that instant I knew
What I'd gone through
Was mainly all
Because of you
Yet, I've done nothing wrong
Which you surely must know
All I can think of
You just hate me so
Another lesson learned
And at least I now know
It is time to move on
It is time to let go
dear poet Hate is a word to hate Love is a word to love And life is a word to remember To live with love and passion
Another lesson learned And at least I now know It is time to move on It is time to let go. liked these lines very much. yes let go is a lesson that we learn that we learn on life's Way. you have presented it in a very fine way. thank you very much. tony
First line: Like a blow with a fist reminded me of my poem NEVER GIVE UP. Keep writing.
A powerful message to all those that are going through distress in relationships. A well articulated poem, well penned to capture the essence of the piece, and the conviction of the poet. A lovely one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Precise and concise. A sad story beautifully presented. A lovely work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it's time to let go a certain truth I know yet i can't leave the memory of your kiss of your hiss of your touch I long so much how to let my soul my core my deepen whole how to let my heart go far and do apart I see you learned a lesson and I must learn how to take my heart tho' rapt yat freedom earn nice poem it recalls memories tho' sweet yet painful thank you for the read.