Time To Waste Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Time To Waste

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It is nice to write
With promises and fight
With the odds and against time
That helps sometimes

We all know about life and journey
We give credit to an almighty
We write nothing with facts
Shed and cast doubts with nothing to react

We are just character
That plays as an actor
With role to play
And then go away

Time may play bad or good
Still the message is not understood
We act in limited space
Fight over ideology and race

We have enough of time to waste
Write over illusory thing to test
It is only for us to prove or disprove
It is resolution in mind to move

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It is nice to write With promises and fight

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Gajanan Mishra 10 July 2014

resolution in mind to move, fine sir, very good, thanks,

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good job! Somesh Panigrahi15 minutes ago reminded me of 'the seven ages'! brilliant!

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like this alot Betty-Gwen WalkerLess than a minute ago i thought this was a great way to to describe everyday life. basically everything is time and role. not who we are but what we are. not who i am, but what ethnicity i might be, or religion. i like your perspective

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Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Maricela Ramírez Hermoso poema. Beautiful poem. (Translated by Bing) 41 mins · Unlike · 1

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George T. Everette · 17 mutual friends I can see the debates with friends and family, loud, sometimes heated, and not changing anyone's mind, but so valued because of the intellectual stimulus and the earned respect of these same who values your opinion to sharpen their own minds. The young don't have time for it and are to concerned about their fragile egos to participate. But they sometime hover about nearby listening and carry something to their own circles. These were my thoughts as I read your poem. 1 hr · Unlike · 1

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Hasmukh Mehta welcome Het Patel, Efe Light Sakpere, Bu Magda Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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