Timeless Poem by Amitava Sur

Timeless

Rating: 5.0


True love between two souls,
Never believes to be parted alone.
One of them who leaves the other
Can never forget,
Cannot ever believe even
As a person who is now slain! !
Henceforth, that lover has to be addressed
with an adjunct as ' WAS '! !

One cannot live but other
But DEATH will not listen either,
Mortality, thus kills and destroys
The immortal love nest.

True love between two souls
Is so intricate,
Our mortal life with a verdict of death
Is unable to restore it’s faith.

But love remains as timeless for ever
In this mortal time bound life
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Amitava (31.3.2015) 6-00 am

Timeless
Monday, March 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 30 March 2015

True love between two souls Is so intricate, Our mortal life with a verdict of death Is unable to restore it’s faith. But love remains as timeless for ever In this mortal time bound life A beautiful poem on true love.

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Jenie Franksay 30 March 2015

really touching and adorable poem... thanks.. :)

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 April 2015

Truly said, true love is unending.

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Powerfully portrayed in this poem is the unbreakable reality of true love!

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Amitava Sur 09 April 2015

Thanks a lot for reading my poem and appreciating the same.I like your poem and will read more in future.

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Roseann Shawiak 05 April 2015

Death may separate two people truly in love, but it cannot diminish or take away the truth between those two souls. Their love lives on eternally in each of their hearts and minds. Images of what they used to do and say live on in their memories, which are treasured and kept always in their hearts. A timeless and beautiful poem of true love, Amitava. Give it 10 - 10's if I could. Thank you for sharing this beautiful moment of your endless love. Magnificent!

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Amitava Sur 09 April 2015

I thank you with regard for appreciating my poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 April 2015

Concluding lines beautifully summarize the eternal nature of true love. Thank you.

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Valsa George 03 April 2015

Death can never rob true love. True love is immortal! Though the corporal form may dissolve in the dust, the spiritual, unseen presence will always remain intact and the dear departed will ever remain in our hearts and memory! A poem affirming the indefatigable bond with a loved one, dead or alive!

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Amitava Sur 09 April 2015

Thanks a lot for reading my poem with patience and appreciating my writing.

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