Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 22,242 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Timeless - Poem by Amitava Sur

True love between two souls,
Never believes to be parted alone.
One of them who leaves the other
Can never forget,
Cannot ever believe even
As a person who is now slain! !
Henceforth, that lover has to be addressed
with an adjunct as ' WAS '! !

One cannot live but other
But DEATH will not listen either,
Mortality, thus kills and destroys
The immortal love nest.

True love between two souls
Is so intricate,
Our mortal life with a verdict of death
Is unable to restore it’s faith.

But love remains as timeless for ever
In this mortal time bound life
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Amitava (31.3.2015) 6-00 am

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Timeless by Amitava Sur

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (4/6/2015 5:47:00 AM)


    Truly said, true love is unending. (Report) Reply

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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/5/2015 8:37:00 PM)


    Powerfully portrayed in this poem is the unbreakable reality of true love! (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (4/9/2015 1:40:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for reading my poem and appreciating the same.I like your poem and will read more in future.

  • (4/5/2015 1:34:00 AM)


    Death may separate two people truly in love, but it cannot diminish or take away the truth between those two souls. Their love lives on eternally in each of their hearts and minds. Images of what they used to do and say live on in their memories, which are treasured and kept always in their hearts. A timeless and beautiful poem of true love, Amitava. Give it 10 - 10's if I could. Thank you for sharing this beautiful moment of your endless love. Magnificent! (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (4/9/2015 1:41:00 AM)

    I thank you with regard for appreciating my poem.

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/4/2015 4:52:00 PM)


    Concluding lines beautifully summarize the eternal nature of true love. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2015 11:02:00 AM)


    love cannot be caged in a shell,

    love to soulmate...
    True love between two souls
    Is so intricate,
    Our mortal life with a verdict of death
    Is unable to restore it’s faith.
    (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (4/3/2015 12:47:00 AM)


    Death can never rob true love. True love is immortal! Though the corporal form may dissolve in the dust, the spiritual, unseen presence will always remain intact and the dear departed will ever remain in our hearts and memory! A poem affirming the indefatigable bond with a loved one, dead or alive! (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (4/9/2015 1:43:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for reading my poem with patience and appreciating my writing.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/31/2015 8:06:00 PM)


    But love remains as timeless for ever
    In this mortal time bound life.......Yes, true love remains for ever. Nicely and aptly presented. A beautiful poem I like best. Many thanks sir.
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  • (3/31/2015 7:46:00 AM)


    Yes ' love remains as timeless for ever In this mortal time bound life'. A beautiful line.
    Elegant and lovely write.
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  • Kelly Kurt (3/31/2015 12:53:00 AM)


    I truly enjoyed this poem, Amitava. Thank you.
    Peace.
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  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/30/2015 11:46:00 PM)


    Nice love poem with a colourful image. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Jenie Franksay (3/30/2015 11:25:00 PM)


    really touching and adorable poem... thanks.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/30/2015 11:19:00 PM)


    True love between two souls
    Is so intricate,
    Our mortal life with a verdict of death
    Is unable to restore it’s faith.
    But love remains as timeless for ever
    In this mortal time bound life
    A beautiful poem on true love.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 8, 2015


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