Timeless Saga Poem by Fay Slimm

Timeless Saga

Rating: 5.0


In a time of long ago, he, - dying,
Turned to look at his true love, and needing
No assurance, took her hand. She was crying
As she saw his wound was deep. Wicked greed
Had robbed her of her Knight. His eyes told her
Of his everlasting love. Whispering low
So only she could hear, he mouthed this prayer.

He said love like theirs would conquer death,
And with faith, one day they would meet, and know
Each other, in another life. - Breathing
Then his last he slipped away. Her sweet face
Became a lonely mask of hidden grief.
No-one on earth would ever take his place.

From that dreadful day she never once more
Smiled, and after many weeks of fret, Lady
Dorothea died of broken heart, nought
Could save her, and they laid her in his grave.


A few more years then passed, and bright young men
Went hiking in the Scottish Glens, - the group
Had stopped to take the view, and two of them
Looked over gates into a field. A troop
Of maidens, dancing for the harvest yield
And dressed in white, now rested, she then turned.

Caught his stare, blue eyes met green and feeling
Suddenly unsteady, she swayed. - A tree
Was near, they took her to the shade. He ran
To help, left his friend, and by her side
He took her hand, and they knew. So began
Their story once again. She was crying.

They realised then they had been lovers
They had met and loved before. Another
Time, another place, but they had parted
Just to wait in secret timeless state, until
Fate had brought them near again, to start
Another cycle of their love. - Souls will
Find their mate when once true love's been known.
Timeless hearts are not left long alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 21 January 2009

WOW! Fay this is a truely fantastic poem of everlasting love 10+++++ Tom

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 January 2009

Thou sayeth lover ever lasting, dear sweet lady, you've the heart of a true romantic and poet... sir Andy 10

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Tony Jolley 02 February 2009

Felt a little like 'Brigadoon', Fay, in the tone and wistfulness of the second meeting... but then you'd be too young to remember that film, I'm sure. Regards, Tony

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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 January 2009

God, Fay, you really get to me with your writing! This is so....words fail me as it feels like I could have thought these thoughts or lived them. God bless those who convinced you to write poetry. Okay, I'll tone it down now.What a heart you have. Hxx

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Fiona Davidson 22 January 2009

your words give life to the images Fay...love is timeless and it goes on past death...wonderful poem...thank you...Fi 10+++

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Scott Austin 22 January 2009

This write is truly a wonderful piece of work that shows that the love between two people never really die but is timeless. Thank you for sharing your work with us…..10 Scott

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Kris Smith 22 January 2009

Beautifully etched tale of love Fay great read thanks Chris 10+++++

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Fay Slimm

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