Tiny Droplets..... [walking Unprepared On A 'Misty' Day; Personal Experience] Poem by Bri Edwards

Tiny Droplets..... [walking Unprepared On A 'Misty' Day; Personal Experience]



Tiny droplets fell, but I did not balk.
When they ceased I went.... for my walk.
I thought “umbrella? ” before I left,
but I wished NOT to.... its weight heft.

I soon got wife’s call; she warned of rain.
I told her I’d turn back. I’m NOT insane!
But I did NOT mean to turn back quickly,
and.... it’s just NOT true I’m always sickly!

Soon tiny droplets again began to fall...
tiny droplets. That was all!
I figured my jacket would protect,
but I erred in my weather projec-
tion.

I would not turn back, at least not yet.
I’d see how much I might get wet,
AND the tiny droplets might well STOP,
and I’d NOT look like.... a sopping mop.

As I neared first third of three mile route,
my choice (to not bring umbrella) I began to doubt.
At first I could see where each drop hit me,
but soon the hits melded..... into a small Sea.
I’d NOT worn my usual broad-brimmed hat;
my glasses got all wet! Think of that!

I turned back and headed home at last,
though cows I passed were holding fast.....
in their pasture.

I thought to myself “Tiny droplets DO add up! ”
If I HAD one, they’d have filled a fair-sized cup,
...... which made me wax philosophical,
giving me thoughts which for me aren’t typical.

Like droplets, tiny life-moments can add up.....
to fill ones “success”, OR “failure”, cup.


(October 27,2013)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The story is pretty spot-on. i heard that expression once: 'spot- on', but i didn't know it is supposed to have a hyphen. in proofreading, i noticed i had 'broad-rimmed hat', but isn't 'broad-brimmed' much better! ? i also changed 'a sea' to 'a Sea', and then to 'a modest Sea', and finally to 'a small Sea'. See? 'she' wasn't home when i arrived with a pretty wet jacket; good for me! :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gergana Teofilova 07 October 2015

Awww...such a cute, little poem! I love rain as long as it's not cold hehe. Tiny droplets are ok but I highly doubt it was that only if you got back home with your clothes soaked through :) Right, tiny life-moments can add up...as well as dreams...

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Bri Edwards 26 November 2013

i just made some slight changes in the poem and the poem note. i don't see the changes YET. :)

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