mehedi faysal

Rookie (Khulna / khulna, bangladesh)

To A Lost Soul - Poem by mehedi faysal

So you think you can leave?
Behind me you can cheat!
What will you get?
Don’t you know?
We got nothing to chase.
Our love is like,
Swimming in a fish bowl.
The same old café, bricks
Running in the same ground.
We’re going round & round.

So you think you can forget?
Don’t you know?
Love is like war,
Leaves scratches all over.
I think what I see,
Is fear?
Fear in your cold eye.
Don’t be afraid,
Love gives love takes.

Do you want to love some one else?
Or want to lost with him!
In to the limpid green!
Do you think?
You are supreme!
All I can guess,
You are making mess!
Love so easy to make,
So hard to forget!
You want to frame your life,
Want to hang it on wall,
Remember time isn’t warm eater
She won’t hide at all.

Didn’t your mother told,
The pain will lead to pleasure.
You have to break your back,
To earn a day of leisure.


Comments about To A Lost Soul by mehedi faysal

  • Randy Hogan (4/21/2009 5:18:00 PM)

    dont make me come bangladesh
    Just to check on you
    don't stop writing
    please let me how you are doing
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  • Brianna Wilshusen (10/5/2008 3:01:00 PM)

    Not a lot of rhyming, but its still there, it joins it together in a sense. I like the similie you used, our love is like, swimming in a fish bowl, it made me have to think on the comparison which was interesting. Ten, and nice wording (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/2/2008 5:55:00 AM)

    To loose a soul is like a life without destiny............soul is the bitterweet of life! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 2, 2008



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