I And I Poem by mehedi faysal
I And I
I see your keeled body.
Held erect like a,
Beautiful flower tree.
As you always use to be.
My eyes are drawn always to the
Hollow of your throat.
If I lay my fingertips against it.
There would be your,
Fluttering pulse beat.
I held your palm
See the beauty of your eye.
I hold you close
My body twisted across yours.
Until you finally break
As you do always.
And the pleasure escapes.
I remained confine in emptiness
I think love is an unholy Goddess.
Turned the silence in to pain
I see sin in your eye.
May be in love pleasure and pain
All are the same.
I see your beautiful face
While you sleep.
When you fly in air on your dreams.
Until you wake.
I get confine in emptiness,
Nothing to say or do while you wake.
I see myself!
I see the person hide beneath me
I & I standing in an empty space
I & I living only with the Gods grace.
There is blood, wounds & death
There is courage, fury and rage
The whole world has gone insane.
Dreams and love are slaughtered in to my street
But hope is on the horizon
Its power is infinite.
So I love to confined in you
In life & death
Love your hollow promises
Eager accept the fate.
A romantic poem whinch ends with a strong hope with infinite power making the love of a poet confined in his lover. I like it because hope heals all deficiencies. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
wow what a great poem! 10/10
I am not quite sure that the translation into English is exactly as it should be for expressing exactly what you want to say. Therefore I cannot recommend this poem until the poet has conferred carefully with a good English communicator to verify each line is the way it was meant to be. GW62
i like it a whole lot but i agree wtih green wolf aliitle but not totaly i think you should um right this one alttle more clear its hard to tell if your talking about s/x or love or the pains of love its agood start though
Very beautifully one. Flows smoothly, capture interest as u go from one piece of the poem to the next.
'I think love is an unholy Goddess. Turned the silence in to pain I see sin in your eye. May be in love pleasure and pain All are the same.', really like this part and very well written faysal. nice work ill say 10
I like how a reader can really get into the peice, it leaves a sort of awe. I gave you a ten. Very nice work.
...'in love pleasure and pain all are the same'... liked this line...duality...in thoughts...in personality...thoughts crowding over words...a good attempt, faysal...9... thanks for inviting me to read...come to my inbox...
Don't just write for yourself, please write for readers of your poems. I like that part of the poem most wherein you have observed your lover. If I give you a 9 you may become satisfied. Keep on trying to improve. So 8.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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such a beautiful and romantic poem-love flowing smoothly right to the end +10 regards anjalie (read mine ARE U THERE)